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(03-09-09, 06:40 PM)mr.pure Wrote: Nothing wrong with it ?
It's fucked.
Capital w on with.
And again on been which would've been alright if the comma had actually been a full stop as he probably intended.
I'd go so far as to say that the above statement by the Lurking is on a par with that of a contemporary English student who got an A.
But not an A*.
Tsk, tsk !
I wish I only got 3 GCSE's and one of them was for gardening, I thought it was a nice intro now Im gonna have to take my 2 wife’s for a walk to cool down.
Wish id of lurked round an English grammar forum now.
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Ey up Lurk dont worry. Am the Queen of grammer fuck ups too. Wanna be in my gang ? (spazas)
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(03-09-09, 06:34 PM)Lorrie Wrote: Nothing wrong with the syntax of the sentence, BL, just your reading ability.
Thanks Lorrie aren’t Canadians so much nicer than them Americans..
(03-09-09, 07:26 PM)sab Wrote: Ey up Lurk dont worry. Am the Queen of grammer fuck ups too. Wanna be in my gang ? (spazas)
yES i DO!!!!!!!!!!!
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Syntax is fine, Mr. P. It's the grammar that's shit.
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(03-09-09, 08:28 PM)Lorrie Wrote: Syntax is fine, Mr. P. It's the grammar that's shit.
I was never very academic so I have given it another go.
Hello my name is David I am 34 Years old and live in Scarborough. I work as a sign builder and I am married with two dogs. I have been collecting superstars for quite a while but unfortunately due to my location there was only a small selection available. In the past I have been to a footlocker where there was a larger selection. The internet was my next port of call where I found a whole world of colours and fabrics. I own somewhere in the region of 30 pairs and hope one day to show you them. I would like to join your community and become a constructive member.
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(03-09-09, 09:32 PM)mr.pure Wrote: Syntax was far from fine Zee.
But never mind.
That's much better Lurch.
Three more commas and it would've been perfect.
Would you say it was a B-
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