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I reckon the laces look better dark as well.
Tell you what Mr, if you can, raise the mid point of the two Ss and the B so that the relevant size of the hoops is 1/3 to 2/3 if you get what I'm saying, also tale the spine of the D up a gnats further, it'll have a more graffiti feel to it then.
Only a thought, it might look butters but it'll be quicker for you to do than me.

I couldn't see any difference in the one you posted?

Is this what you meant?? I have raised the x-height on the S's and the B, and extended the spine of the D a smidge. Also added a little curve into the bit that joins the S's cos it looked a little off being straight.