23-04-15, 06:32 PM
Haha, fair point, better to have too many commas than none at all.
But "whilst" is a connective and therefore doesn't need a comma after it. You could argue about the other two but I don't see the need for a pause anywhere in that sentence. Anyway, I'm taking off my grammar hat now!
In other news, my black Undefeated/BAPE Supes arrived today. Very happy with them!
But "whilst" is a connective and therefore doesn't need a comma after it. You could argue about the other two but I don't see the need for a pause anywhere in that sentence. Anyway, I'm taking off my grammar hat now!
In other news, my black Undefeated/BAPE Supes arrived today. Very happy with them!

