10-07-09, 12:58 AM
I doubt Ollie would've given his permission if he'd seen the site, frankly.
It looks very amateur and shows little sign of any research having been done into similar websites with no idea for the look and feel of the style of the potential market.
The trainers are bog standard, in limited sizes.
You have joined up and other than the first three lines of your introduction, everything else has been about your business, including asking what we do for a living.
No one else has ever gotten away with this level of plugging, let alone a noob, and neither will you.
It looks very amateur and shows little sign of any research having been done into similar websites with no idea for the look and feel of the style of the potential market.
The trainers are bog standard, in limited sizes.
You have joined up and other than the first three lines of your introduction, everything else has been about your business, including asking what we do for a living.
No one else has ever gotten away with this level of plugging, let alone a noob, and neither will you.