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RE: I wanna be in your gang - Lurkzilla - 03-09-09

(03-09-09, 06:40 PM)mr.pure Wrote:  Nothing wrong with it ?
It's fucked.
Capital w on with.
And again on been which would've been alright if the comma had actually been a full stop as he probably intended.
I'd go so far as to say that the above statement by the Lurking is on a par with that of a contemporary English student who got an A.
But not an A*.

Tsk, tsk !

I wish I only got 3 GCSE's and one of them was for gardening, I thought it was a nice intro now Im gonna have to take my 2 wife’s for a walk to cool down.

Wish id of lurked round an English grammar forum now.

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RE: I wanna be in your gang - sab - 03-09-09

Ey up Lurk dont worry. Am the Queen of grammer fuck ups too. Wanna be in my gang ? (spazas)

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RE: I wanna be in your gang - Lurkzilla - 03-09-09

(03-09-09, 06:34 PM)Lorrie Wrote:  Nothing wrong with the syntax of the sentence, BL, just your reading ability.

Thanks Lorrie aren’t Canadians so much nicer than them Americans..

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(03-09-09, 07:26 PM)sab Wrote:  Ey up Lurk dont worry. Am the Queen of grammer fuck ups too. Wanna be in my gang ? (spazas)

yES i DO!!!!!!!!!!!

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RE: I wanna be in your gang - Lorrie - 03-09-09

Syntax is fine, Mr. P. It's the grammar that's shit.

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RE: I wanna be in your gang - Lurkzilla - 03-09-09

(03-09-09, 08:28 PM)Lorrie Wrote:  Syntax is fine, Mr. P. It's the grammar that's shit.

I was never very academic so I have given it another go.

Hello my name is David I am 34 Years old and live in Scarborough. I work as a sign builder and I am married with two dogs. I have been collecting superstars for quite a while but unfortunately due to my location there was only a small selection available. In the past I have been to a footlocker where there was a larger selection. The internet was my next port of call where I found a whole world of colours and fabrics. I own somewhere in the region of 30 pairs and hope one day to show you them. I would like to join your community and become a constructive member.

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RE: I wanna be in your gang - mr.pure - 03-09-09

Syntax was far from fine Zee.
But never mind.

That's much better Lurch.
Three more commas and it would've been perfect.

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RE: I wanna be in your gang - Lurkzilla - 03-09-09

(03-09-09, 09:32 PM)mr.pure Wrote:  Syntax was far from fine Zee.
But never mind.

That's much better Lurch.
Three more commas and it would've been perfect.

Would you say it was a B-

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RE: I wanna be in your gang - mr.pure - 03-09-09

Errrrm, yeah, I suppose.

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